Using Mentor Texts to Teach Similes in Writing

Similes Add Style to Middle School Writing

Similes and metaphors might be my favorite figurative language skills to teach because once students notice what they are, they find them everywhere in fiction literature. Similes make everything better. At first glance, students keep reading over them, but the understanding of similes and metaphors unlocks another layer of reading. It is a layer that is deeper and makes readers really think. Figurative language skills matter because they help build critical readers. When building sentence fluency, these skills create stronger readers that add sentence variety and fluency to their writing skills. While you can catch similes in almost any work of fiction these days, I like the books featured in this post for the deliberate instruction of simile usage in literature. This post will outline three books and examples of similes, and it will also show you how I help young writers transfer these skills to their own writing through the mentor text process.

Easy as pie.

If you are interested in learning more about the mentor text process, start here. You may also want to check out my professional development presentation on using mentor texts in the literacy classroom.

BLENDED BY SHARON DRAPER

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BOOK TRAILER

STUDENTS WRITE DOWN SENTENCES IN NOTEBOOK

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STUDENTS SEE OTHER EXAMPLES TO MAKE CONNECTIONS

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ARU SHAH AND THE END OF TIME BY ROSHANI CHOKSHI

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BOOK TRAILER

STUDENTS WRITE DOWN SENTENCES IN NOTEBOOK

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THE BRIDGE HOME BY PADMA VENKATRAMAN

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STUDENTS WRITE DOWN SENTENCES IN NOTEBOOK

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Students Write Like Authors

SIMILE BANK FOR STUDENTS TO REFERENCE

This part of the lesson begins with students picking their favorite simile on the board. If they have another one in mind that is more than fine. The goal is for them to write one down, and this essentially becomes a mini-story idea for them to write a little bit about. I want young writers to use similes in their writing as naturally as possible to practice adding it to their own work, but also to be able to recognize this strategy in the books they are reading in class and on their own. After we write mini-stories, we share our ideas with each other.

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Writing Mindset Reflection: How do you teach similes and metaphors in your classroom? How do you help students transfer these skills to their own writing?


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Stephanie Hampton

A dedicated educator with over a decade of experience in public education, specializing in English Language Arts, writing instruction, and using mentor texts in the classroom. Stephanie currently works as an educational consultant. When she isn’t talking about teaching, she is with her family, spending time journaling, and enjoying a fresh cup of coffee.

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